This continues with more vignettes from Lacey's work at The Brothel. The tales get kinkier. I would like to see the story between the vignettes fleshed out so we get to know Lacey outside of The Brothel. V. Vaugn's writing is solid and clean. She pays attention to detail but there are times when Lacey's telling gets bogged down in repetition of what she is doing, what she feels, and what she says with her clients. Expanding the story outside of Lacey's sexual acts would cut down on the repetition and would have me hungering for the next installment of Lacey's story. |