This is a short read but I could not figure out what the plot is. I believe this is to be the set up for a series. Scarlet gets a job but the company is a mystery and what she will do there is a mystery except for having sex with the boss. The story needs editing. I would be reading a paragraph then two paragraphs later the same paragraph or a very little changed paragraph would be there again. I thought I was rereading the previous paragraph. There is no order in the story line. The characters are weak. They are sleazy. I would run out of this place of employment as fast as I could run. |