Maple runs into trouble with a co-worker who enlists the aid of a board member to have Maple fired. Maple tries to handle the problem but Grant helps her. I like Maple and Grant. I would like to see the story focus more on them and their relationship and leave the other distractions out. They could be strong central characters who can carry the series on their own as their relationship proceeds. Again the story needs to be fleshed out. At times I felt I was missing key points to the story. When V. Vaugn finally gets into the story and her words start flowing, the story ends. I particularly liked the last third of the story and wanted it to go on. I like her writing style and would like to see what she could do with a longer story where more detail could be put into the tale. |