Jasmine enters the coffee shop where Marianne is the barista. To Marianne she is the most beautiful woman she’s ever seen. Losing concentration, Marianne drops the order causing her boss, Helen, to come from the back. Helen then reprimands Marianne.
I liked this tale. Helen and Jasmine show totally different reactions to Marianne’s clumsiness. I liked the contrast between the two. Marianne was interesting. Subservient with one. An equal with the other. The sex play was different with Marianne and each partner. Again I liked the contrast. I know which one I preferred.
I look forward to more like this from Ava Sterling.